just a couple final changes i wanted to make to this one. re-did the B section sub bass on the mopho, just a simple triangle bass (trying to be conscious of making the sub bass audible if it’s being played through mobile speakers, for example). also made a very simple transition from B to A, and added a little more melody support in the B section.
there might still be some mixing work to be done, especially removing some extraneous noise/hiss and other unwanted fragments of sound.