16th hh no swing, no hit on downbeat. cutoff rising counter melody has some kind of sc modulation on filter env? takes away from presence. second time around filter cut should not go so high, it changes with counter melody. (fixed)
B section krog low half of the melody could be a different instrument. (not yet fixed)
is there key mod on krog? really obscured by lpf in low range (fixed)
more perc and sweep build to transition back to A, loop point is slightly after return of A (fixed but could use more of a build, some kind of cutoff sweep synth arp?)